Halloween By Tim

This is my comic life poster on Halloween. My partner was Latisha.

Rubric: By Tim

This is Pace's Rubric. Pace judged me on my presentation. My partner was Latisha. Latisha and I need to work on to have a clear voice.

Halloween Presentation - Tim & Latisha

This is my Presentation on Halloween.

My Narrative check-list - By Timothy

Narrative Checklist

Narrative Criteria
I can write an orientation
I can describe where the story takes place
I can describe when the story takes place
I can describe how the story begins
I can introduce my characters
I can define my characters’ personalities
I can describe what my characters look like
I can create a problem that my characters experience
I can include a resolution - how the problem / situation was solved
I can write a final concluding statement
, metaphors, onomatopoeia, personification
I can use a variety of language features, e.g. active verbs, conjunctions, similes

Surface Features Checklist

Surface Features Criteria
I can write in full sentences
I can sequence my ideas clearly		`
I can use complex sentences
I can vary sentence beginnings
I can use conjunctions e.g. “and” correctly
I can use capital letters correctly
I can use full stops correctly
I can spell all my words correctly
I can proof read my writing
I can edit my writing-by making changes to the vocabulary e.g. said - yelled, asked, etc.
I can write in paragraphs

This is My Narrative Check-list. I have to work on to complex sentences and I have to work on to conclude a statement. My strengths are I can proof read my work when I'm finish. I can spell words correctly, when I get the word wrong I fix up the mistake. My weakness are to tell when the story takes place and where the story takes place. 

The Three Little Pigs By Tim

The Three Little Pigs

One day there were three little pigs and their mother. The mother wanted the three little pigs to build houses because they were growing up. So they took off. The first little pig built his house out of straw. After the 1st little pig finished the second pig built his house out of sticks. Finally the third little pig built his house out of bricks. It took along time to build his house. Then the big bad wolf came out of the forest and saw the straw house.  The Big Bad Wolf looked into the window and said in a tiny little voice “ Little pig, little pig can I come in “ and the first little pig said angrily “ No, No, No, I will not let you in.

So the Big Bad Wolf kicked and kicked till the straw house was destroyed. The first little pig ran to the second little pigs house and yelled “ Help, Help, Help! The second little pig said “ Get in, Get in!
The Big Bad Wolf came over to the house made of sticks and looked into the window. He  said
“Little pigs, little pigs let me come in”.
The little pigs said” No, No, No we will not let you in. So the Big Bad Wolf kicked and kicked till the house was destroyed. The first and the second little pigs ran to the third little pigs house and yelled “Help, Help, Help”. Later the Big Bad Wolf came to the third little pigs house and looked into the window.  The Wolf shouted“Little pigs, Little pigs can I come in”
The little pigs said angrily “No, No, No we will not let you in” The Big Bad Wolf growled “Fine I will Kick and kick till the house is destroyed”. So the Big Bad Wolf kicked and kicked, but the house didn’t get destroyed. He was so tired, so he climbed up the chimney.

The three little pigs knew that the Big Bad Wolf was climbing down the chimney. So the three little pigs had an idea. The three little pigs put a big pot of boiling water with carrots, broccoli and cabbage in the boiling water. The Big Bad Wolf didn’t know the big pot with all the vegetables was in the fire place. Finally the big bad wolf fell into the big boiling water, SPLASH! the Big Bad Wolf fell into the boiling water. The three little pigs had the Big Bad Wolf for dinner. The three little pigs lived happily ever after.

THE END

Sumdog Result By Timothy

This is my Sumdog result on Cake Monsters.

Festivals and Celebrations By Tim

This is my Popplet about Festivals and Celebrations. I have brainstormed lots of celebrations and festivals from New Zealand and from Overseas.