Simple Sentences and Compound Sentences - Tim and Raymond

Simple sentences

He was surfing in the water.

The Dogs are playing in the water

Jack saw a bunch of family ducks.

Compound Sentences

Nonu tried to catch the ball, but someone tackled him

The bear chased the people down the road, but the bear could not catch them.

A nurse stabbed a needle into a kid for injection, but he didn’t enjoy that experience

This document is the final task that me and Raymond have finished together. We are glad we got to do this tasks.

ifaketext.com: Simple or Compound Sentences w/ Raymond - Tim

Today one of our tasks Mrs Donaldson asked us to do the Tasks, and one of them was ifaketext.com. We had to have a conversation with our partner and my partner was Raymond. ifaketext.com is where we have a conversation, which looks like a iPhone conversation on Messages. We talked about Conjunctions in this one. 

ifaketext.com: Simple or Compound Sentence Conversation w/ Raymond - Tim

Today one of our tasks Mrs Donaldson asked us to do the Tasks, and one of them was ifaketext.com. We had to have a conversation with our partner and my partner was Raymond. ifaketext.com is where we have a conversation, which looks like a iPhone conversation on Messages. We talked about Sentences in this one. 

Online Activity: Compound or Simple Sentence? - Tim

Today Mrs Donaldson introduced to this quiz where there is a bunch of question which is Compound or Simple, we have the option if the Sentence is Compound or Simple. My result is 100%

Tim- Thinking Group

Today My group, Fine, Saruja and Santat, worked on a equation that Mrs Donaldson. It was very tricky but Room 5 worked it out together. We all did put together our strategies, including Mine. We did similar strategies. 

Homework (W11 T2 Final) - Tim

This is my homework for the next 2 weeks. Our homework for the past two weeks was Galileo Galilei, at first I had know clue who he was until I did this homework project. I really liked doing this Galileo Galilei project. I am shocked that he discovered 4 moons, which orbits Jupiter.

Popplet: Should NZ Change their Flag - Tim

Yesterday Saruja and I created a popplet for if NZ should change their flag. So I did The No Reasons and Saruja did the yes reasons. and then after We were done doing that we went on to do NZ flags. Me and Saruja also put at the top the Learning Intention, OREO, which means Opinion, Reasons, Explanation, Opinion (Again). The last thing we did was use facts and statistics. We were shocked at the percentages. 

IXL, Compound and Simple Sentence Test - Tim

Today I did a IXL compound and simple sentence test. I had to figure out what is a compound sentence and they have examples of sentences so I have to see which one is a compound sentence. Simple sentence is the same as the compound sentence structure. 

ifaketext Conversation - Tim

So this is the final conversation with Evelyn. Here I used a persuasie language feature which is Facts and Statistics. I use it on how many people disagree for changing the flag and how many people agree to change the flag, also I added in the undecided people

ifaketext.com Conversation 2 - Tim

So I did this is part 2 of the previous iPhone conversation. I have carried on my iPhone conversation with Evelyn. I have used persuasive features, which are Rethorical Question, Repition, Emotive Language, Groups of 3, Exaggeration. 

ifaketext.com

ifaketext.com Conversation - Tim

Today I used a app Mrs Anderson showed us where we type in a conversation and it forms sort of like a iPhone conversation on the app messages. So this is my pretending I am texting my friend Evelyn. I talk to her about should we change the NZ flag. 

ifaketext.com

Xtra Maths Results: Subtraction (Debut) - Tim

So I have moved onto subtaction, YAY!. I was so excited but then I was to used to Subtraction I lost my mind, but atleast I got more smiley faces then my wrongs and ticks. I am proud of my self, so yeah, I am really liking Xtra Maths so far it is helping me with my maths. 

XtraMaths: Addition (Final) - Tim

So today in maths I am did XtraMaths, I am still on addition, I only got one tick, one wrong and 76 smiley faces, I am proud of my self, I got one wrong because I haven't been on XtraMaths for the past week, so I think I forgot my maths but now I know the answers for the questions/equations. 

Blog Comment #6 - Tim

Today I had to do a blog comment to Room 6, So I chose to do my room 6 comment to my best friend Juliano. He learnt a new word 'Mortified' 

Maori Contingent Poster - Tiare, Tim and Saruja

Today Saruja,Tiare and I made a poster for men to join the Maori Contingent. In the poster it says, At the top it says that to come and fight for our country. Then below it says that all men are allowed to participate in the war. 

Timeline about Maori Battalion - Saruja, Tiare and Tim

Today Today Tiare, Tim and I, did a timeline on Maori Battalion. We went from 5th August, 1914 to 25 April 1915. We talked about being sended to Egypt, and when Britain declares war against Germany thats when it all started.

Homework: Burger (W8 T2) - Tim

This is Room 5's homework for this week Burgers/Hamburgers. For homework I did how to make a burger. There is 6 steps on how to make a edible burger. 

Letter To The Editor (Copy 2) - Saruja, Tiare and Tim

Dear Editor of Maori Battalion.         23/08/1915                     

                                                                                                              

Today we would like to ask you some question about WW1.

I hope you know what we are going to say in this letter.

We red your story and it says that brown people are not allowed to fight in WW1. We thought because they are not good  at fighting or they won’t focus, so our  question is

Why wouldn’t you let the brown people fight in WW1?

Is there a reason why white people won’t let brown people take part in the war?

Why don’t you want all kinds of people participating in war?

We think it is not fair for native people like brown people to be digging out trenches while other soldiers fight for their country. We think all people should have the right to fight for their country.

Waikato people and the Taranaki people had the right to disagree of taking part in the war.

We think that because the government took away their land, so we think it is fair to disagree.

We feel like  brown people altogether that should’ve been involved in the war. We hope you agree with our opinions

                                      

                                      Your Sincerely,Saruja, Tim and Tiare

This is the same version as my letter to the editor. I am posting it in another font because some people will not be able to read it properly so I have made another copy with only Arial as font.

Letter to the Editor of Maori Battalion - Saruja, Tiare and Tim

Today Saruja, Tiare and I, did a letter to the editor. We have stated our opinions and we hopefully didn't do it in a negative way, we just felt like stating our opinions and why brown people had to dig our trenches instead of fighting for their country or our country. Brown people are also known as native people.

Maori Battalion Collage - Saruja, Tiare and Tim

Today I did a collage, about the Maori Battalion. I worked with Saruja and Tiare and we all worked together to form this collage. We have another activity in progress, which I will hopefully be putting it on my blog.

Jerry Collins DLO - Tim

Today Room 5 did a DLO on Jerry Collins, who sadly lost his life with his wife in a fatal car accident. We sincerely hope that Jerry Collins daughter recovers. This DLO is about Jerry Collins, which is about his Rugby Career. Something interesting that I found about is that his biceps are 56cm long. 

XtraMaths Results #2: Tim

Today I did XtraMaths, I had to race the teacher in order to get to a specific number like 88, which I have gotten 88 smiley faces out of because I got 88 equations correct. I am really proud of my self and I beat the high score that I got on Thursday. 

WW1 Animals Prezi - Latham and Tim

Yesterday Me and Latham, Latham had to present it by himself because I went to Ukelele and I knew he would be brave to present. I heard he did a really good job. Our WW1 Animals prezi was about the animals in the war. We wrote about was it fair for the animals, we talked about Caesar, Mascots, Training, Feelings.

XtraMaths Result - Tim

So Today I did XtraMaths. I had to race the teacher and I got 71 smiley faces for getting the answer correct. I am still on addition but probably I will be on subtraction. I really enjoy playing XtraMaths because it helps me improve my maths knowledge and when I am racing the teacher, it makes my brain think very fast so I can answer the question. 

Homework #1: How Eyes Work (W7 T2) - Tim

How Eyes Work is the homework for this week for room 5. I have listed the natural eye colours. I have done a brief explanation about how eyes work and how can we see. I have also listed 8 interesting facts about the human eye. The most interesting fact that shocked me was how the human eye can be sun burned and I was like how is that possible, but I guess it is. This is my homework for the week.