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Thursday 6 March 2014

Feb Writing Sample By Tim



What Makes A Good Friend?          By Tim
A friend is someone you can trust that will never let you down in any way. A friend is also someone that is kind and loyal, who will help you through your problems.
Forgiving- A friend will forgive you even though you broke one of their toys, they will still like you as a friend now matter how many times you broke their toys or property.


Trustworthy - Someone that can keep your secret and won’t tell to anyone like your parents, your enemies, students that you hate, they won’t tell to anyone at all because they are you friend/BFF.


Respectful - A friend is someone that respects your property and other people. A bad friend ( which shouldn't be your friend) will not respect your property and other people, but a good friend will respect you, your property and other people.              
I was here to tell you what a friend is like. If you see someone who is cool and flash, don’t go wasting your time telling them to be your friend because you’re draw attention to yourself instead of other people. Find a friend who you have common with and like as a person not someone else.
This is my Feb Writing Sample. We had to write an explanation of what a friend does or what they do. We had to write a Title , Introduction, I.P.I.O (Important Points In Order ) and finishing it off with a conclusion. This will help you what is a friend. 



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