Special Tree - Tim

Special Tree: 

Island Bay is a beautiful long beach. Cliffs made beautiful shapes for us to admire, waves hitting against the rocky seashore. Me and my 2 best friends had a lot of memories there. There was this one tree where the trunks formed into different. I turned around to my friends and said "This could be our tree, our only tree". The Tree connected with a big cliff which we usually climb up on and see the most amazing view of Island Bay. 

We decided to have a little chat on top of the tree. I felt really uncomfortable. The bumps on the tree made it very hard to sit on. The tree bark scraping against my leg, leaving scratches. Soon enough we realised this could be our only tree. We engraved our initials so that when we come back, we will never forget each other. One year later, we barely saw each other, we hadn't visited our tree in months and we grew apart from each other. 

Something changed, our parents started talking to each other, we saw each other more. We then reunited with our tree and was surprised our initials, was still there untouched. We laughed, we smiled, we got angry, but at the end of the day we are the bestest friends. Nothing can tear us apart. 

Focus:

- Pronouns 

- Dialogue