Popplet: Should NZ provide breakfast in schools - Tim
Today I did a DLO on popplet about if NZ should provide breakfast in schools. I did a opinion on the 'yes' side and a opinion on the 'no' side. I have also added and 'I don't know' side and I also added facts and statistics. I am on the 'yes' side.
I really liked you popplet about Should NZ provide breakfast for school. I agree with you because children might come to school hungry because they didn't have anything when they came to school it might be because they were rushing or woke up late. The thing you could work on is trying to make your sentences make sense because I couldn't really understand what you were saying when I read it.
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Hey Tim
I really liked you popplet about Should NZ provide breakfast for school. I agree with you because children might come to school hungry because they didn't have anything when they came to school it might be because they were rushing or woke up late. The thing you could work on is trying to make your sentences make sense because I couldn't really understand what you were saying when I read it.
From Tiare
Thank You Tiare for the feedback and feedforward
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