Hi Tim, Your homework is perfect, because you have used rainbows colours which makes the readers interested. Like Miss Donaldson said that you have added some tips for more detail.
I think you did well, next time make sure you have used some different fonts, because some fonts are very tiny to read.
It's good that you take your time to do a wonderful homework. Keep it up!
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Hi Tim, great job on your homework task. The instructions are clear and I like how you have added some tips for more detail.
Hi Mrs Donaldson,
Thank you for the reply, and feedback.
Hi Tim,
Your homework is perfect, because you have used rainbows colours which makes the readers interested. Like Miss Donaldson said that you have added some tips for more detail.
I think you did well, next time make sure you have used some different fonts, because some fonts are very tiny to read.
It's good that you take your time to do a wonderful homework.
Keep it up!
Sincerely,
Saruja
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